Panel 1

Dialogue:
- Donna: “WHERE WERE YOU BEFORE YOU TURNED GREEN?”
- Milo: “THE BREAK ROOM”
- Donna: “LET’S GO”

Actions: Donna stands beside Milo in the marketing office. She looks down at him while asking her question. Milo looks up at her with wide eyes and a small smile.

Panel 2

Dialogue:
- Milo: “I WAS CHECKING ON THE BONSAI”
- Donna: “IT LOOKS BETTER”

Actions: Donna and Milo are in the break room beside a round black table holding a small bonsai tree. Milo stands behind the table, with the bonsai's branches extending in front of his face. Donna stands to the right with her hands behind her back. A trash can containing discarded papers sits to the left.

Panel 3
Dialogue: None.

Actions: Donna and Milo remain beside the bonsai tree. Donna looks toward the wall behind Milo with an alarmed expression, while Milo gazes happily at the bonsai. Neither character speaks.

Panel 4
Dialogue: None.

Now visible from Donna's point of view: A notice on the wall proclaiming, “Everything is fine!” It is handwritten and appears hastily taped over a torn Caution poster.
A smiley face is drawn underneath the message.
Actions: A close-up shows Milo standing behind the round table, still green, still smiling. Pieces of orange paper with partial CAUTION lettering are visible behind the notice and inside the trash can.

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Notice

Cartoon portrait of Donna Lake with short hair, purple glasses, and a lavender sprig beside her name deskplate

From Donna's Desk:

A handwritten sign may announce, “Everything is fine.”

The trash can may suggest otherwise.

Most of us are good at cleaning up the visible part of a problem. We straighten the room, offer a quick explanation, and move on.

What matters is whether the problem was actually solved or simply made less noticeable.

That is true of office messes, missed deadlines, morale, and just about every “small issue” that keeps returning.

I do not need perfection. I do need enough honesty to know what I am looking at.

So I’m curious:

What have you seen get cleaned up without really getting fixed?

What clue told you there was more to the story?

I’ll be here, checking whether “fine” has supporting documentation.

Donna